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“You're the worst thing that ever happened to me...”
That's the last thing he said when he looked me in the eyes,
Dead, cold, meaningless, hurtful.
He's like the anchor set to my ankle,
Dragging, pulling, leading me to destruction
His words kill me over, over, and over.

He's that faulty compass,
Deceiving me, forcing me in the wrong direction.
He's the ultimate enemy.

Fracture me,
Break everything that makes me want to live.
You were the world,
You told me we were perfect
But now its over,
It's ended

Like the bomb to the chest of a man,
On a mission into the unknown.

Repetition against this betrayal he forces against my heart,
It destroys me piece by piece, day by day.
Set the sail, hoist the anchor, set the course of revenge a different way,
Rip me in two, take your love away.
My only destruction comes when you are gone
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no, it's not about my boyfriend.

it was originally set with the "he's" and "his"s being "she's" and "her"'s but yeah. he was a bit more appropriate because i'm handing this into my english teacher for the first in the poetry units were doing.

i've been listening to too much i killed the prom queen and stuff like that lately. it sounds somewhat like what they'd write. lol
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~blackroseless:iconblackroseless: May 15, 2008, 4:25:29 AM
Absolutely lovely.. I don't know if it's because I'm so tired, but that brought a tear to my eye...

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~killerfeeling:iconkillerfeeling: May 15, 2008, 4:25:54 AM
i like this so much..i can totally feel it. nice work.:D

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~superfizz:iconsuperfizz: May 15, 2008, 4:27:02 AM
wow, that's deep

Very good work!

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~societysprisoner:iconsocietysprisoner: May 15, 2008, 5:09:20 AM
well. thank you, it means a lot :]
~blackroseless:iconblackroseless: May 15, 2008, 5:12:06 AM
Your welcome

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~Fallen-Angel-696:iconFallen-Angel-696: May 26, 2008, 3:10:00 AM
you're so good at writing now =)
I think im gonna go through your gallery and read your writing.
Its always so very emotional
and i love it

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~societysprisoner:iconsocietysprisoner: May 26, 2008, 5:58:45 AM
haha. its from bring me the horizon, actually. well thats my thoughts.
they've inspired me so much in so many ways. my thoughts can go down in a decent way now.

thank you :]